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The MovieMan looks at Gibson's NEUROMANCER script... an early draft

Hey folks Harry here, and I am here to introduce this review of Neuromancer. This script has been floating around for seemingly forever, but remains unmade. Great novel, great ideas and story... Will it ever equate a good movie? Personally I'm happy with having the book... But a film would be waaaay cool. Here's MovieMan on this old draft he found...

I'm a huge Neuromancer fan. I'm the Neuromancer equivelant to a "Treker" or "Trekie". I suppose you could call me a "Mancer". Anyway, I recently got a chance to go over a copy of the script for William Gibson's Neuromancer. Bottom line: I loved it. The draft I read was dated 5/19/90 and was around 130 pages long.

The Plot

Case is a hacker in the year 2015 (a date they might want to change). It opens up with Case having his nerves fried by Sense/Net (a private company that serves as a police force who protect corprate intrests on the matrix). A year later he's running drugs in Chiba City (Japan) looking for a black clinic who can cure his fried nerves. He gets setup by someone named 'Wintermute' and his girlfriends killed by the Yakuza. Case then meets the street-wise leather-clad Molly. Molly takes Case to Armitage, the leader. Case is recruited into a team who's mission is to "burn" (kill) an A.I. (Artificial Intelligence) called Wintermute.

Characters

This is what makes Neuromancer different from other Sci-Fi flicks of it's kind. The characters in Neuromancer are well written and have more deapth then say those in Johnny Mnemonic. Case has real motivation to carry out this mission. There's a great scene where he explains how he became a hacker to Molly. Molly is another well written character. She's an intresting character because she's the one kicking-ass, not Case. Some of my favorite dialouges have been left out, like the one where she talks to Case about "Johnny" and how he was killed ny the Yakuza. Unfortunatly, because this is only a two hour movie, the other supporting characters are simplfied a bit. Armitage's backround is pretty basic. Malcome and Aerol aren't much different. They're still outer space rastafarians. Rivera's a little different, but he's still really creepy. And Wintermute could be a great villian in the tradtion of HAL 9000.

The Action

Well, written and exciting. The action in the script gets your blood pumping but also doesn't overshadow the story. I can't wait to see some of these scenes on the big screen.

The Changes

In the book cyberspace "cowboys" are rampent but in the script all but a few have been "retired" by sense/net security inc. (including Case). The ending is also slightly different, I don't want to spoil it here but it should please both movie-goers and fans of the book.

Overall

This one is a winner. This could be the next great sci-fi flick like Blade Runner, Alien, Metropolis, or Forbidden Planet. If any of you reading this have read the book and have a question about the script or if you've read a different draft of the script and would like to share your thoughts, e-mail me at MuvieMan7@aol.com.

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Neuromancer
by blueboy
Jul 22nd, 1999
07:54:05 PM
Eh.
by Prankster
Jul 22nd, 1999
08:10:02 PM
Neuromancer
by amberjazz
Jul 22nd, 1999
08:34:58 PM
matrix/neuromancer
by blueboy
Jul 22nd, 1999
08:45:46 PM
A new kind of direction
by gary2012
Jul 22nd, 1999
10:04:31 PM
Gibson is God.
by Vincent D.
Jul 22nd, 1999
10:32:25 PM
-=Phriendly neighborhood Phreak=-
by Phr33k0uT
Jul 23rd, 1999
12:07:51 AM
At last I feel Educated..
by nolajay
Jul 23rd, 1999
12:34:12 AM
"Idoru"
by Revelare
Jul 23rd, 1999
12:36:59 AM
Come On My Selector
by Pearsquasher
Jul 23rd, 1999
01:18:44 AM
At last...
by Riviera
Jul 23rd, 1999
02:34:48 AM
James Cameron
by Alessan
Jul 23rd, 1999
02:35:09 AM
Dull dull dull
by StuEdwards
Jul 23rd, 1999
04:20:01 AM
Sneakers
by Ciara
Jul 23rd, 1999
05:28:10 AM
I doubt this is really in production . . .
by The Graduate
Jul 23rd, 1999
06:26:20 AM
Cameron
by Riviera
Jul 23rd, 1999
06:27:50 AM
oh shit
by zinky
Jul 23rd, 1999
06:50:01 AM
This was an old script...
by Perfect Tommy
Jul 23rd, 1999
07:08:38 AM
I want to be an AICN expert
by Azure Tyger
Jul 23rd, 1999
07:13:43 AM
TO THE SARKY ONE
by zinky
Jul 23rd, 1999
07:26:05 AM
re Blueboy...you are out of your depth, boy
by diablo
Jul 23rd, 1999
07:54:45 AM
It's about time & PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!
by Epsilon3
Jul 23rd, 1999
08:04:56 AM
MAKE THIS MOVIE!
by GurneyHalleck
Jul 23rd, 1999
09:18:29 AM
Visual directors
by Dmann
Jul 23rd, 1999
10:30:40 AM
-=Phriendly neighborhood Phreak=-
by Phr33k0uT
Jul 23rd, 1999
10:33:20 AM
EXPIRATION DATE
by Weasel
Jul 23rd, 1999
12:56:33 PM
EXPIRATION DATE
by Weasel
Jul 23rd, 1999
12:58:27 PM
The expiration date on this codom was yesterday...
by Quack
Jul 23rd, 1999
04:15:02 PM
duh
by blueboy
Jul 23rd, 1999
05:24:33 PM
Neuromancer to Snow Crash
by Fourmyle
Jul 23rd, 1999
06:48:09 PM
FYI: Neuromancer was not the first cyberpunk novel
by Epsilon3
Jul 23rd, 1999
08:30:32 PM
I want to be Molly!
by Sarcasmo
Jul 23rd, 1999
10:33:33 PM
You twits, Tiptree wrote the first Cyberpunk fiction...
by Iwrite
Jul 24th, 1999
12:08:17 AM
Neuromancer
by CASE
Jul 24th, 1999
03:23:15 AM
The Diamond Age
by Stainles Steel
Jul 24th, 1999
05:24:04 AM
Not late at all
by Epsilon3
Jul 24th, 1999
05:28:51 AM
chris cunningham
by scorpioRising
Jul 24th, 1999
07:40:20 AM
BURN CYCLE!!
by Spacey
Jul 24th, 1999
03:08:48 PM
re: truck
by Epsilon3
Jul 24th, 1999
05:30:04 PM
Music video directors
by Hepcat
Jul 24th, 1999
08:55:54 PM
gibson film
by Pilot
Jul 24th, 1999
09:43:59 PM
gibson film
by Pilot
Jul 24th, 1999
09:53:35 PM
Neuromancer trilogy
by psiKick
Jul 25th, 1999
12:12:41 AM
Don't Believe The Hype!
by andydiggle
Jul 25th, 1999
10:00:42 AM
JM & Molly
by vinylsaurus
Jul 26th, 1999
02:02:03 PM
Neuromancer needs cunningham
by ADNT13!
Jul 27th, 1999
05:44:31 PM
The Zen Differential & Michael Mann
by Gyrobot
Jul 28th, 1999
05:56:27 AM
URL
by Phydeaux
Jul 29th, 1999
10:01:09 AM
If they wait any longer it will BE 2015.
by Wolfpack
Aug 15th, 2006
01:40:08 PM

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