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Merrick Says "Yippee Kai Yay!" To The DIE HARD 4.0 Script!!
…with a look at DIE HARD 4.0.
Over the years, we’ve heard many rumors about this film: one said it would be set on a cruise ship, another indicated the plot would involve a space launch. There were once suggestions that a third sequel would take Bruce Willis’ John McClane character overseas; a forth piece of gossip indicated all of the good guys from the original DIE HARD film would return (Reginald VelJohnson, Bonnie Bedelia, etc.) There were so many possibilities it was difficult to know what to think…
But, it now seems that all parties concerned have closed-in on a concept that may finally make it to screen. Indications are DIE HARD 4.0 will roll as early as September, and Len Wiseman (the director of the two UNDERWORLD films) was recently selected to helm it.
With all of this in mind, please know…
THERE ARE MAJOR SPOILERS FOR DIE HARD 4.0 BELOW!!!
TURN BACK NOW IF YOU WISH TO REMAIN UNSPOILED, OR FOREVER HOLD YOUR PEACE!!!
IS THIS THE SAME DRAFT THAT HAS ALREADY BEEN REVIEWED ELSEWHERE?
No. That draft was by Mark Bomback, and had New Orleans in it. This one does not. The previous draft also features characters who are no longer in this revision – they’ve been replaced by significant additions, like John McClane’s son!
This is Doug Richardson’s revision Bomback’s work. Richardson was a writer on BAD BOYS, DIE HARD 2, and Bruce Willis’ HOSTAGE.
WHAT’S IT ABOUT? WHO THE HELL ARE THESE “INTERNET TERRORISTS” WE HEARD ABOUT THE OTHER DAY?
The “internet terrorists” are a bunch of folks who have banned together to reboot America.
In a phased process, they intend to systematically demolish or seize our technological infrastructure via a three-day plan. It starts small: the wide-spread scuttling of traffic control systems, and inconvenient things like that. Later, economic mechanisms tumble (like stock markets, banking computers, credit cards, etc.) Emergency response systems and utilities (water) also go down. Finally, power distribution…and the few remaining utilities/systems…are paralyzed. America has been thrown into complete shut-down, thrust into a modern Dark Ages (remember ESCAPE FROM L.A.?)
We see all of this happen in the script – it begins *very* early on, before we understand the nature of the caper being advanced. The script is divided into Day 1, Day 2, and Day 3. There’s an escalating sense of foreboding right out of the gate; an inexplicable nuclear power plant crisis…McClane’s inability to secure a rental car due to an unusual computer glitch…every stoplight in the city turning (and staying) green simultaneously – causing instant gridlock.
To what end are the bad guys doing this?
This movement is being spearheaded by a high-profile government consultant, to whom The Powers That Be will unknowingly turn when everything comes tumbling down. He and his odd band of followers will earn big, big money by restoring our nation’s infrastructure swiftly and ably.
WHAT DOES THIS HAVE TO DO WITH JOHN MCCLANE?
We first find John McClane as he’s picking his son up from prison. Ashton Kutcher?
His son, whose name is John (he goes by “Jack G” – the “G” referring to Gennero, his mother’s last name) has been serving time for cyber crimes – in this instance the acquisition of extremely sensitive/classified information.
Jack has no particular affinity for his father. Apparently John is, simply, John – whether he’s being a hero or being a dad. In both roles he’s a brash, egotistical, smart-ass, fly-by-the-seat of his pants kind of guy who seems to thrive on dysfunction. But Jack was looking for more in a father…and didn’t find it in John…who is consistently the only person he knows how to be. As such, the two are at a major impasse.
The bad guy’s three day plan is based partially on Jack’s cyber shenanigans – the same ones that got him thrown into jail. Which means Jacks is suddenly a valuable asset to the government. Since he knows so much about the bad guys’ MO, maybe he can help stop them? A cyber-terrorism detachment called D.E.R.T. approaches John and Jack in an effort to procure Jack G’s help – before the nation is brought to its knees.
Things go very badly in this encounter. John and Jack G end-up on-the-run, struggling to evade the forces of a government they do not trust…dodge the minions of the bad guys who know that Jack G can stop them (hence they want him deleted)…and survive in a world that is, literally, falling apart around them.
SOUNDS EPIC! HOW BIG DOES THIS STORY GET?
Sweeping vistas of “end of the world” kind of imagery. Vast deserted areas, cutaways to events happening all over the country (outages, lootings, families huddled around televisions, highways are filled with people headed for the hills – but unable to get anywhere). One scene references burning buildings in Harlem with tanks and Humvees establishing martial law.
DOES ANYONE SAY “YIPPEKAYAY, MOTHERFUCKER!”?
Yes.
DO ANY CHARCTERS FROM THE OTHER FILMS (BESIDES MCCLANE AND HIS SON) APPEAR IN DIE HARD 4.0?
No. No characters from other films are even referenced by name. There are some organic ways they could be incorporated, though.
WHO ARE THE NEW CHARACTERS THIS TIME AROUND?
Other than Jack G? The villain, Greg Pope. A Federal agent named Rooney – a tough-as-nails African American woman. A rabble of ex-athletes – Pope’s private security force. Various supernumeraries – a surprisingly large cast of supporting players, most of whom are rather well drawn and distinct.
WHAT IS THIS MOVIE’S MONEY SHOT?
Seems like every DIE HARD movie has a single image that becomes iconic.
In the first film, I’d say it was that low-angle shot of McClane jumping off the edge of the Nakatomi building with a fire hose tied around his waist. In DIE HARD 2, it was probably the aerial shot of McClane ejecting from the exploding plane – flying into our face before being pulled back by gravity. The third film? The derailed subway cars sweeping destructively through the underground train platform beneath New York City.
Here? The image that pops to mind is McClane jumping from train car towards which two Sidewinder missiles are headed. He dives from the target as the missiles rip forward on either side of him, impacting spectacularly.
WHAT SURPRISED ME ABOUT THIS STORY?
It’s extremely nihilistic.
Previous DIE HARD films have certainly had anti-establishment tendencies, but 4.0 takes disdain of institution to a whole new level.
John and Jack’s movements are constantly (and instantaneously) tracked by surveillance cameras; references to “Big Brother” are made. There is a strong “us against them” vibe.
The film vividly illustrates how easily controlled and undermined our society can be – should the slightest technological snafu trip us up. 4.0 even seems to imply that we’re already far too dependent on technology – that we’ve lost our ability to adapt and improvise, and are well past the point of no return.
It feels like something of a cautionary tale, and references characters that have previously warned against the perils of technological vulnerability – but they could find no one to listen.
Acknowledgment is also made to bureaucratic disorganization and incompetence. Much like the Katrina aftermath in New Orleans, several different departments head several different directions when struggling to address the three day crisis – effectively impeding a hasty resolution to the turmoil at hand.
WHAT DOESN’T WORK ABOUT THE SCRIPT?
The final quarter of the script involves a hidden component of the bad guy’s plan. This feels a bit inorganic, and tacked on. I won’t spoil everything herein, but suffice to say the scheme is gargantuan, and Lex Luthor-ian in nature.
It’s never clear if this was actually the villain’s design all along, or if this element was being held a as a fallback plan in case the ransom of the United States didn’t pan out as the nasties intended. It should be wonderfully spectacular on-screen, but it feels incongruous and a bit over-the-top – undercutting the headier tension that comes before.
WILL THIS WORK AS A MOVIE?
There’s a lot of compelling and interesting stuff in 4.0.
McClane’s trademark cut-downs and taunts are funnier here than in any other DIE HARD film. He may be older, but his wit has grown more acerbic over the years – and his self-restraint is thinner than ever before.
You’ll see certain themes carry through: McClane engages in a classic sparring session over a phone, similar in tone to his torment of Alan Rickman’s Hans Gruber in the first film. NEWS COVERAGE (and the availability of information) plays an important role in how the storyline unfolds – another DIE HARD conceit.
As a whole, this plot feels like a cross between the tech-heavy ENEMY OF THE STATE and a SUPERMAN film. And, like ENEMY OF THE STATE, there are allusions to stylistic considerations surrounding high-tech surveillance.
For example, references are made to VFX in which the audience becomes a data pattern, or signal. We’re catapulted at dizzying velocities through fiber optic networks, or launched skyward to slam into orbiting satellites. This kind of super-charged, hyper-stylized storytelling is fine enough, but it gets old when used to often…and it gets old very fast. We’ve seen this kind of trickery before - it’s distracting, and not a gimmick to rely on too heavily.
The POWER of this script, and the cleverness of its premise, does not lie in visual razzle-dazzle. Instead, director Len Wiseman may be well advised not to approach this material with his characteristic sledge-hammer sensibility – such handling will utterly thrash the vast atmospheric potential that runs throughout the story.
This is a story about an Armageddon of sorts; it’s about what happens when we no longer have the choice to live the way we’re used to living. It’s about what happens when the lights go out & there’s no way to call someone on the phone for comfort or reassurance. It’s about seeing the world we know closed down, as far as the eye can see, and a small group of heroes being forced to work within limitations they’ve never even conceived of before.
The film should play to this innate desperation, fear, desolation, paranoia, and apprehension. It should make the ambience affecting. If Wiseman doesn’t rely on bombast (yeah…I know…but I said “if”…), and treats 4.0 as an artistic exercise more than a bludgeoning, this film has the potential to be one hell of an inventive, effective, and even chilling ride – one that might make us feel a little, and think a little, along the way.
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Reader Talkback
Firsty Mcfirst first by Vim Fuego | Jun 1st, 2006 05:17:31 PM | Er... by jasper Stillwell | Jun 1st, 2006 05:18:02 PM | sounds terrible by reckni | Jun 1st, 2006 05:19:24 PM | this sounds like a wannabe
"24" by Toe Jam | Jun 1st, 2006 05:21:47 PM | Curses 'Vim Fuego'
...the war for earth is not
yet over by jasper Stillwell | Jun 1st, 2006 05:23:52 PM | So It's Die Hard & Son by Sean38 | Jun 1st, 2006 05:32:11 PM | How about a review of that
Transformers script by Lando Griffin | Jun 1st, 2006 05:32:43 PM | There needs to be a strong
homosexual role model by Monkeybutt2000 | Jun 1st, 2006 05:32:45 PM | TOO SOON!!! by Thunderpants | Jun 1st, 2006 05:35:58 PM | You gotta be fucking kidding
me by sevadro | Jun 1st, 2006 05:36:03 PM | Snakes on a web server!! by quadrupletree | Jun 1st, 2006 05:37:19 PM | YouTube by Thunderpants | Jun 1st, 2006 05:41:02 PM | Oh yeah, I just read this
morning that this is not by Lando Griffin | Jun 1st, 2006 05:43:39 PM | A strong homosexual role
model? by godoffireinhell | Jun 1st, 2006 05:45:16 PM | And why do we care about this? by Rupee88 | Jun 1st, 2006 05:45:39 PM | LANDO by Joseph Merrick | Jun 1st, 2006 05:49:20 PM | Toe Jam... by 24200124 | Jun 1st, 2006 05:51:01 PM | "Makes you think?!!" Who wants
to think in Die Hard? by Stallion_Cornell | Jun 1st, 2006 05:52:19 PM | the "4.0" thing somehow puts
me in the mindframe of by Cedar_Room | Jun 1st, 2006 06:01:33 PM | That'll do Merrick.
That'll do. by Tony Mike Hall | Jun 1st, 2006 06:03:46 PM | Didn't they just do this
plot on smallville? by Jack_Bauer | Jun 1st, 2006 06:04:16 PM | Glad I went for my dump before
I read that. by Vim Fuego | Jun 1st, 2006 06:08:40 PM | Should be team up with
McClaine, his dad, ex-wife,
&son by Big Bad Clone | Jun 1st, 2006 06:14:56 PM | sounds like... by arctor | Jun 1st, 2006 06:18:17 PM | i would rather this was the
script for the 24 movie.... by slappy jones | Jun 1st, 2006 06:22:09 PM | as much as i like the Die
Hard films.... by emeraldboy | Jun 1st, 2006 06:32:25 PM | as much as i like the Die
Hard films.... by emeraldboy | Jun 1st, 2006 06:35:56 PM | This doesnt read as a Die Hard
film... by Wonderboys | Jun 1st, 2006 06:42:14 PM | '24' has ruined me for
movies like this. by I Dunno | Jun 1st, 2006 06:42:41 PM | Die hard 4. post 2.0 by emeraldboy | Jun 1st, 2006 06:43:09 PM | Chris Rock could play John
Jr... by Wonderboys | Jun 1st, 2006 06:43:33 PM | What happened to Die Hard
taking place in one location? by Sworn42Enemy | Jun 1st, 2006 06:44:39 PM | THIS SOUNDS FUCKING TERRIBLE! by 102276 | Jun 1st, 2006 06:45:37 PM | I read somewhere that... by Drworm2002 | Jun 1st, 2006 06:45:48 PM | 'banned together' by Det. John Kimble | Jun 1st, 2006 06:48:04 PM | Is Bruce only doing this due
to contractual obligations by TJ50 | Jun 1st, 2006 06:52:07 PM | A New Orleans Die Hard would
have been cool. by 102276 | Jun 1st, 2006 06:53:25 PM | Merrick by Lando Griffin | Jun 1st, 2006 06:59:13 PM | Why do you guys Die Hard
3 by Lovecraftfan | Jun 1st, 2006 07:14:27 PM | I WOULD SO FUCKIN' PAY TO
SEE DEVITO AS McCLANE! by Shermdawg | Jun 1st, 2006 07:19:10 PM | "Ties A Firehose Around His
Waste" by Kubla_Khan | Jun 1st, 2006 07:33:03 PM | Is there going to be a... by Blue_Demon | Jun 1st, 2006 07:45:18 PM | I hope to Christ they
don't make this. by The-Warrior | Jun 1st, 2006 07:56:03 PM | A two word review.... by Capt. Miller | Jun 1st, 2006 08:02:02 PM | This isn't Die Hard,
it's James Bond. Fuck
this. by Larry of Arabia | Jun 1st, 2006 08:08:21 PM | The casting of the son is SO
crucial here by performingmonkey | Jun 1st, 2006 08:14:18 PM | Bonnie Bedelia for the lead! by Christopher3 | Jun 1st, 2006 08:21:26 PM | "with a fire hose tied around
his waste" by Rowley Birkin QC | Jun 1st, 2006 08:22:37 PM | Sounds interesting but
it's not Die Hard. by masheen81 | Jun 1st, 2006 08:38:01 PM | This makes me want to go and
indulge in by Lando Griffin | Jun 1st, 2006 08:39:58 PM | Oh yeah by Lando Griffin | Jun 1st, 2006 08:44:33 PM | Actually it sounds very
interesting... by RenoReno | Jun 1st, 2006 08:55:21 PM | This isn't John Maclaine
territory..it's Jack
Bauer' by eppdude | Jun 1st, 2006 09:14:45 PM | It'll be terrible and make
huge money... by Alonzo Mosely | Jun 1st, 2006 09:18:27 PM | Die Harderest: Mostly Dead by stvnhthr | Jun 1st, 2006 09:30:34 PM | I'm with you Toe Jam - 24
all over again. by moviemaniac-7 | Jun 1st, 2006 09:31:08 PM | Think I'd rather see Die
Hard 12: Die Hungry by Zeke25:17 | Jun 1st, 2006 09:39:35 PM | Great script review Merrick by Darth Thoth | Jun 1st, 2006 09:44:40 PM | The Deadliest Game by stvnhthr | Jun 1st, 2006 09:59:11 PM | Didnt anyone like Die Hard
3 by Lovecraftfan | Jun 1st, 2006 10:15:48 PM | The Most Dangerous Game by DarthCorleone | Jun 1st, 2006 10:20:52 PM | Flash Gordon is on Encore
Action right now by Sir Loin | Jun 1st, 2006 10:28:35 PM | You have to contain the
location of a Die Hard movie! by Osmosis Jones | Jun 1st, 2006 10:43:53 PM | Capt. Miller... by havocSchultz | Jun 1st, 2006 10:53:39 PM | Hard Boiled Detective by CHEWBLACCA | Jun 1st, 2006 11:25:08 PM | I actually liked Die Hard 3 by Darth Thoth | Jun 1st, 2006 11:25:18 PM | Who I want to see as McClane
Jr. by Claudio | Jun 2nd, 2006 12:25:49 AM | by Regicidal_Maniac | Jun 2nd, 2006 12:29:23 AM | Fucking Keyboard! by Regicidal_Maniac | Jun 2nd, 2006 12:35:30 AM | by Claudio | Jun 2nd, 2006 12:51:59 AM | i second the jack black idea
... by caipirina | Jun 2nd, 2006 12:56:43 AM | Revenge of the Nerds. by veritasses | Jun 2nd, 2006 01:17:25 AM | "Richardson was a writer on
BAD BOYS" by CuervoJones | Jun 2nd, 2006 02:38:09 AM | I Used To Write Scripts Hoping
They'd Become DH Sequels by Buzz Maverik | Jun 2nd, 2006 02:56:38 AM | Whow, now i'm definitely
SO NOT INTERESTED by CurryIce | Jun 2nd, 2006 02:59:33 AM | DEAD HARD? by Buzz Maverik | Jun 2nd, 2006 03:02:26 AM | Hans Gruber is still one of my
fav baddies by spectrebeeyatch | Jun 2nd, 2006 03:26:59 AM | Shocker by Fortunesfool | Jun 2nd, 2006 03:34:56 AM | Terrorist without machine guns
are pussies! by Max Rockatansky | Jun 2nd, 2006 03:48:42 AM | "and his self-restraint is
thinner than ever before" by TheBoyFromUlster | Jun 2nd, 2006 04:20:33 AM | it's 39 by reckni | Jun 2nd, 2006 05:36:28 AM | EMINEM for the role of the
son! by IAmMrMonkey | Jun 2nd, 2006 05:38:55 AM | This script review is already
outdated. by FatPaul | Jun 2nd, 2006 06:24:18 AM | Die Hard 3 was cool. by Teamwak | Jun 2nd, 2006 06:37:27 AM | Why is it that in the script
stage... by DocBosch | Jun 2nd, 2006 07:59:45 AM | "Shoot, the glass." by brycemonkey | Jun 2nd, 2006 08:00:09 AM | DarthCorleone by stvnhthr | Jun 2nd, 2006 08:12:10 AM | No real bad guys once
again!!!!!!!! by ptindy | Jun 2nd, 2006 08:15:54 AM | Nope. Move along. Nothing to
see here. by Roguewriter | Jun 2nd, 2006 08:46:10 AM | Diehard Y2K? by ScienceMan | Jun 2nd, 2006 09:01:07 AM | QUESTION FOR MERRICK PLEASE by optimist008 | Jun 2nd, 2006 09:07:18 AM | I loves me some Die Hard,
but.... by savagexp | Jun 2nd, 2006 09:28:56 AM | Said it before, will say it
again by Cotton McKnight | Jun 2nd, 2006 11:06:35 AM | Dude, you are tripping. by brycemonkey | Jun 2nd, 2006 11:31:02 AM | Ptindy: North Korean
terrorists? by FatPaul | Jun 2nd, 2006 11:47:07 AM | 2 and 3 are not in the same
league as 1 by I Dunno | Jun 2nd, 2006 01:09:35 PM | I also like Die Hard 3! by pokadoo | Jun 2nd, 2006 01:53:36 PM | will he be wearing another
sandwich board in this? by durhay | Jun 2nd, 2006 01:55:43 PM | Sounds like it has potential by Lost Skeleton | Jun 2nd, 2006 02:13:49 PM | i want to see this.. by El Borak | Jun 2nd, 2006 02:49:55 PM | Sounds too "epic" by Billy_Batts | Jun 2nd, 2006 03:09:49 PM | If they tone down the
violence.. by Neo Zeed | Jun 2nd, 2006 03:33:35 PM | Merrick why did you get rid of
the Transformers.. by godhatesyou | Jun 2nd, 2006 04:41:57 PM | It wasn't Merrick,
godhatesyou by finky089 | Jun 2nd, 2006 04:45:45 PM | Merrick had destroyed the
Transformers movie. by godhatesyou | Jun 2nd, 2006 04:50:30 PM | Please Lord, don't let
Justin Timberlake be in
this... by Col. Klink | Jun 2nd, 2006 05:12:44 PM | Die Hard 3 was not a Die Hard
movie... by Col. Klink | Jun 2nd, 2006 05:21:20 PM | good god this is bad by LarryTheCableGuy | Jun 2nd, 2006 05:27:29 PM | will this one be set at
christmas time? by LarryTheCableGuy | Jun 2nd, 2006 05:34:00 PM | Shopping Mall at Christmas... by finky089 | Jun 2nd, 2006 05:41:32 PM | Die Hard creators have a beer
and cheet on McClane by finky089 | Jun 2nd, 2006 06:00:59 PM | Not Die Hard by Playhouse | Jun 2nd, 2006 08:38:48 PM | you lost me with the
writer's resume by Maniaq | Jun 2nd, 2006 09:35:08 PM | The only way for the Die Hard
4 script to work. by Alonzo Mosely | Jun 2nd, 2006 10:25:13 PM | Actually Maniaq, DH2 was NOT a
Die Hard movie either by Col. Klink | Jun 2nd, 2006 10:30:06 PM | Hey, Sweet! I say go with it. by BendersShinyAss | Jun 3rd, 2006 03:51:29 AM | I must be the only person who
saw DH2 on par with DH1 by BendersShinyAss | Jun 3rd, 2006 04:03:14 AM | Just sounds too big... by dr_buggerlugs | Jun 3rd, 2006 05:49:12 AM | not usually a hater by smackfu | Jun 3rd, 2006 06:34:24 AM | Merrick---can you confirm this
scoop from CINESCAPE? by masheen81 | Jun 3rd, 2006 09:53:57 AM | Amercia the depressing.... by UncleEthan | Jun 3rd, 2006 10:11:13 AM | So McClane' son saves the
day then? by football | Jun 3rd, 2006 04:20:20 PM | Movie villain = Ashton Kutcher by veritasses | Jun 4th, 2006 12:07:38 AM | So the terrorists are going to
do a cybercrime .... by Mr Cairo | Jun 4th, 2006 02:47:39 AM | what the fuck!!!!!!!!!!!!!! by dirty old len | Jun 4th, 2006 10:50:12 AM | It burnsssss usssss! by 'Cholera's Ghost | Jun 4th, 2006 11:50:31 AM | ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!!!?? by Captain Happy | Jun 4th, 2006 12:50:08 PM | PS/ by Captain Happy | Jun 4th, 2006 01:00:18 PM | You know what would have been
a great John McLane flick by Orbots Commander | Jun 4th, 2006 04:59:38 PM | Techno Horseshit by Antz | Jun 4th, 2006 05:11:57 PM | "banned together?" by Childe Roland | Jun 5th, 2006 09:34:39 AM | First by AddictedtoBoobs | Oct 20th, 2006 04:38:59 PM | Dr. Mindbender must be rolling
over in his grave. by Flansy | Oct 21st, 2006 12:59:59 PM | where are all the other posts? by just pillow talk | Jun 26th, 2007 01:27:29 PM | Wow it was far more promising by SpencerTrilby | Jul 12th, 2007 05:35:01 PM |
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