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Merrick Says "Yippee Kai Yay!" To The DIE HARD 4.0 Script!!


Merrick here...


…with a look at DIE HARD 4.0.

Over the years, we’ve heard many rumors about this film: one said it would be set on a cruise ship, another indicated the plot would involve a space launch. There were once suggestions that a third sequel would take Bruce Willis’ John McClane character overseas; a forth piece of gossip indicated all of the good guys from the original DIE HARD film would return (Reginald VelJohnson, Bonnie Bedelia, etc.) There were so many possibilities it was difficult to know what to think…

But, it now seems that all parties concerned have closed-in on a concept that may finally make it to screen. Indications are DIE HARD 4.0 will roll as early as September, and Len Wiseman (the director of the two UNDERWORLD films) was recently selected to helm it.

With all of this in mind, please know…




THERE ARE MAJOR SPOILERS FOR DIE HARD 4.0 BELOW!!!




TURN BACK NOW IF YOU WISH TO REMAIN UNSPOILED, OR FOREVER HOLD YOUR PEACE!!!




IS THIS THE SAME DRAFT THAT HAS ALREADY BEEN REVIEWED ELSEWHERE?

No. That draft was by Mark Bomback, and had New Orleans in it. This one does not. The previous draft also features characters who are no longer in this revision – they’ve been replaced by significant additions, like John McClane’s son!

This is Doug Richardson’s revision Bomback’s work. Richardson was a writer on BAD BOYS, DIE HARD 2, and Bruce Willis’ HOSTAGE.


WHAT’S IT ABOUT? WHO THE HELL ARE THESE “INTERNET TERRORISTS” WE HEARD ABOUT THE OTHER DAY?

The “internet terrorists” are a bunch of folks who have banned together to reboot America.

In a phased process, they intend to systematically demolish or seize our technological infrastructure via a three-day plan. It starts small: the wide-spread scuttling of traffic control systems, and inconvenient things like that. Later, economic mechanisms tumble (like stock markets, banking computers, credit cards, etc.) Emergency response systems and utilities (water) also go down. Finally, power distribution…and the few remaining utilities/systems…are paralyzed. America has been thrown into complete shut-down, thrust into a modern Dark Ages (remember ESCAPE FROM L.A.?)

We see all of this happen in the script – it begins *very* early on, before we understand the nature of the caper being advanced. The script is divided into Day 1, Day 2, and Day 3. There’s an escalating sense of foreboding right out of the gate; an inexplicable nuclear power plant crisis…McClane’s inability to secure a rental car due to an unusual computer glitch…every stoplight in the city turning (and staying) green simultaneously – causing instant gridlock.

To what end are the bad guys doing this?

This movement is being spearheaded by a high-profile government consultant, to whom The Powers That Be will unknowingly turn when everything comes tumbling down. He and his odd band of followers will earn big, big money by restoring our nation’s infrastructure swiftly and ably.


WHAT DOES THIS HAVE TO DO WITH JOHN MCCLANE?

We first find John McClane as he’s picking his son up from prison. Ashton Kutcher?

His son, whose name is John (he goes by “Jack G” – the “G” referring to Gennero, his mother’s last name) has been serving time for cyber crimes – in this instance the acquisition of extremely sensitive/classified information.

Jack has no particular affinity for his father. Apparently John is, simply, John – whether he’s being a hero or being a dad. In both roles he’s a brash, egotistical, smart-ass, fly-by-the-seat of his pants kind of guy who seems to thrive on dysfunction. But Jack was looking for more in a father…and didn’t find it in John…who is consistently the only person he knows how to be. As such, the two are at a major impasse.

The bad guy’s three day plan is based partially on Jack’s cyber shenanigans – the same ones that got him thrown into jail. Which means Jacks is suddenly a valuable asset to the government. Since he knows so much about the bad guys’ MO, maybe he can help stop them? A cyber-terrorism detachment called D.E.R.T. approaches John and Jack in an effort to procure Jack G’s help – before the nation is brought to its knees.

Things go very badly in this encounter. John and Jack G end-up on-the-run, struggling to evade the forces of a government they do not trust…dodge the minions of the bad guys who know that Jack G can stop them (hence they want him deleted)…and survive in a world that is, literally, falling apart around them.


SOUNDS EPIC! HOW BIG DOES THIS STORY GET?

Sweeping vistas of “end of the world” kind of imagery. Vast deserted areas, cutaways to events happening all over the country (outages, lootings, families huddled around televisions, highways are filled with people headed for the hills – but unable to get anywhere). One scene references burning buildings in Harlem with tanks and Humvees establishing martial law.


DOES ANYONE SAY “YIPPEKAYAY, MOTHERFUCKER!”?

Yes.


DO ANY CHARCTERS FROM THE OTHER FILMS (BESIDES MCCLANE AND HIS SON) APPEAR IN DIE HARD 4.0?

No. No characters from other films are even referenced by name. There are some organic ways they could be incorporated, though.


WHO ARE THE NEW CHARACTERS THIS TIME AROUND?

Other than Jack G? The villain, Greg Pope. A Federal agent named Rooney – a tough-as-nails African American woman. A rabble of ex-athletes – Pope’s private security force. Various supernumeraries – a surprisingly large cast of supporting players, most of whom are rather well drawn and distinct.


WHAT IS THIS MOVIE’S MONEY SHOT?

Seems like every DIE HARD movie has a single image that becomes iconic.

In the first film, I’d say it was that low-angle shot of McClane jumping off the edge of the Nakatomi building with a fire hose tied around his waist. In DIE HARD 2, it was probably the aerial shot of McClane ejecting from the exploding plane – flying into our face before being pulled back by gravity. The third film? The derailed subway cars sweeping destructively through the underground train platform beneath New York City.

Here? The image that pops to mind is McClane jumping from train car towards which two Sidewinder missiles are headed. He dives from the target as the missiles rip forward on either side of him, impacting spectacularly.


WHAT SURPRISED ME ABOUT THIS STORY?

It’s extremely nihilistic.

Previous DIE HARD films have certainly had anti-establishment tendencies, but 4.0 takes disdain of institution to a whole new level.

John and Jack’s movements are constantly (and instantaneously) tracked by surveillance cameras; references to “Big Brother” are made. There is a strong “us against them” vibe.

The film vividly illustrates how easily controlled and undermined our society can be – should the slightest technological snafu trip us up. 4.0 even seems to imply that we’re already far too dependent on technology – that we’ve lost our ability to adapt and improvise, and are well past the point of no return.

It feels like something of a cautionary tale, and references characters that have previously warned against the perils of technological vulnerability – but they could find no one to listen.

Acknowledgment is also made to bureaucratic disorganization and incompetence. Much like the Katrina aftermath in New Orleans, several different departments head several different directions when struggling to address the three day crisis – effectively impeding a hasty resolution to the turmoil at hand.


WHAT DOESN’T WORK ABOUT THE SCRIPT?

The final quarter of the script involves a hidden component of the bad guy’s plan. This feels a bit inorganic, and tacked on. I won’t spoil everything herein, but suffice to say the scheme is gargantuan, and Lex Luthor-ian in nature.

It’s never clear if this was actually the villain’s design all along, or if this element was being held a as a fallback plan in case the ransom of the United States didn’t pan out as the nasties intended. It should be wonderfully spectacular on-screen, but it feels incongruous and a bit over-the-top – undercutting the headier tension that comes before.


WILL THIS WORK AS A MOVIE?

There’s a lot of compelling and interesting stuff in 4.0.

McClane’s trademark cut-downs and taunts are funnier here than in any other DIE HARD film. He may be older, but his wit has grown more acerbic over the years – and his self-restraint is thinner than ever before.

You’ll see certain themes carry through: McClane engages in a classic sparring session over a phone, similar in tone to his torment of Alan Rickman’s Hans Gruber in the first film. NEWS COVERAGE (and the availability of information) plays an important role in how the storyline unfolds – another DIE HARD conceit.

As a whole, this plot feels like a cross between the tech-heavy ENEMY OF THE STATE and a SUPERMAN film. And, like ENEMY OF THE STATE, there are allusions to stylistic considerations surrounding high-tech surveillance.

For example, references are made to VFX in which the audience becomes a data pattern, or signal. We’re catapulted at dizzying velocities through fiber optic networks, or launched skyward to slam into orbiting satellites. This kind of super-charged, hyper-stylized storytelling is fine enough, but it gets old when used to often…and it gets old very fast. We’ve seen this kind of trickery before - it’s distracting, and not a gimmick to rely on too heavily.

The POWER of this script, and the cleverness of its premise, does not lie in visual razzle-dazzle. Instead, director Len Wiseman may be well advised not to approach this material with his characteristic sledge-hammer sensibility – such handling will utterly thrash the vast atmospheric potential that runs throughout the story.

This is a story about an Armageddon of sorts; it’s about what happens when we no longer have the choice to live the way we’re used to living. It’s about what happens when the lights go out & there’s no way to call someone on the phone for comfort or reassurance. It’s about seeing the world we know closed down, as far as the eye can see, and a small group of heroes being forced to work within limitations they’ve never even conceived of before.

The film should play to this innate desperation, fear, desolation, paranoia, and apprehension. It should make the ambience affecting. If Wiseman doesn’t rely on bombast (yeah…I know…but I said “if”…), and treats 4.0 as an artistic exercise more than a bludgeoning, this film has the potential to be one hell of an inventive, effective, and even chilling ride – one that might make us feel a little, and think a little, along the way.



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Firsty Mcfirst first
by Vim Fuego
Jun 1st, 2006
05:17:31 PM
Er...
by jasper Stillwell
Jun 1st, 2006
05:18:02 PM
sounds terrible
by reckni
Jun 1st, 2006
05:19:24 PM
this sounds like a wannabe "24"
by Toe Jam
Jun 1st, 2006
05:21:47 PM
Curses 'Vim Fuego' ...the war for earth is not yet over
by jasper Stillwell
Jun 1st, 2006
05:23:52 PM
So It's Die Hard & Son
by Sean38
Jun 1st, 2006
05:32:11 PM
How about a review of that Transformers script
by Lando Griffin
Jun 1st, 2006
05:32:43 PM
There needs to be a strong homosexual role model
by Monkeybutt2000
Jun 1st, 2006
05:32:45 PM
TOO SOON!!!
by Thunderpants
Jun 1st, 2006
05:35:58 PM
You gotta be fucking kidding me
by sevadro
Jun 1st, 2006
05:36:03 PM
Snakes on a web server!!
by quadrupletree
Jun 1st, 2006
05:37:19 PM
YouTube
by Thunderpants
Jun 1st, 2006
05:41:02 PM
Oh yeah, I just read this morning that this is not
by Lando Griffin
Jun 1st, 2006
05:43:39 PM
A strong homosexual role model?
by godoffireinhell
Jun 1st, 2006
05:45:16 PM
And why do we care about this?
by Rupee88
Jun 1st, 2006
05:45:39 PM
LANDO
by Joseph Merrick
Jun 1st, 2006
05:49:20 PM
Toe Jam...
by 24200124
Jun 1st, 2006
05:51:01 PM
"Makes you think?!!" Who wants to think in Die Hard?
by Stallion_Cornell
Jun 1st, 2006
05:52:19 PM
the "4.0" thing somehow puts me in the mindframe of
by Cedar_Room
Jun 1st, 2006
06:01:33 PM
That'll do Merrick. That'll do.
by Tony Mike Hall
Jun 1st, 2006
06:03:46 PM
Didn't they just do this plot on smallville?
by Jack_Bauer
Jun 1st, 2006
06:04:16 PM
Glad I went for my dump before I read that.
by Vim Fuego
Jun 1st, 2006
06:08:40 PM
Should be team up with McClaine, his dad, ex-wife, &son
by Big Bad Clone
Jun 1st, 2006
06:14:56 PM
sounds like...
by arctor
Jun 1st, 2006
06:18:17 PM
i would rather this was the script for the 24 movie....
by slappy jones
Jun 1st, 2006
06:22:09 PM
as much as i like the Die Hard films....
by emeraldboy
Jun 1st, 2006
06:32:25 PM
as much as i like the Die Hard films....
by emeraldboy
Jun 1st, 2006
06:35:56 PM
This doesnt read as a Die Hard film...
by Wonderboys
Jun 1st, 2006
06:42:14 PM
'24' has ruined me for movies like this.
by I Dunno
Jun 1st, 2006
06:42:41 PM
Die hard 4. post 2.0
by emeraldboy
Jun 1st, 2006
06:43:09 PM
Chris Rock could play John Jr...
by Wonderboys
Jun 1st, 2006
06:43:33 PM
What happened to Die Hard taking place in one location?
by Sworn42Enemy
Jun 1st, 2006
06:44:39 PM
THIS SOUNDS FUCKING TERRIBLE!
by 102276
Jun 1st, 2006
06:45:37 PM
I read somewhere that...
by Drworm2002
Jun 1st, 2006
06:45:48 PM
'banned together'
by Det. John Kimble
Jun 1st, 2006
06:48:04 PM
Is Bruce only doing this due to contractual obligations
by TJ50
Jun 1st, 2006
06:52:07 PM
A New Orleans Die Hard would have been cool.
by 102276
Jun 1st, 2006
06:53:25 PM
Merrick
by Lando Griffin
Jun 1st, 2006
06:59:13 PM
Why do you guys Die Hard 3
by Lovecraftfan
Jun 1st, 2006
07:14:27 PM
I WOULD SO FUCKIN' PAY TO SEE DEVITO AS McCLANE!
by Shermdawg
Jun 1st, 2006
07:19:10 PM
"Ties A Firehose Around His Waste"
by Kubla_Khan
Jun 1st, 2006
07:33:03 PM
Is there going to be a...
by Blue_Demon
Jun 1st, 2006
07:45:18 PM
I hope to Christ they don't make this.
by The-Warrior
Jun 1st, 2006
07:56:03 PM
A two word review....
by Capt. Miller
Jun 1st, 2006
08:02:02 PM
This isn't Die Hard, it's James Bond. Fuck this.
by Larry of Arabia
Jun 1st, 2006
08:08:21 PM
The casting of the son is SO crucial here
by performingmonkey
Jun 1st, 2006
08:14:18 PM
Bonnie Bedelia for the lead!
by Christopher3
Jun 1st, 2006
08:21:26 PM
"with a fire hose tied around his waste"
by Rowley Birkin QC
Jun 1st, 2006
08:22:37 PM
Sounds interesting but it's not Die Hard.
by masheen81
Jun 1st, 2006
08:38:01 PM
This makes me want to go and indulge in
by Lando Griffin
Jun 1st, 2006
08:39:58 PM
Oh yeah
by Lando Griffin
Jun 1st, 2006
08:44:33 PM
Actually it sounds very interesting...
by RenoReno
Jun 1st, 2006
08:55:21 PM
This isn't John Maclaine territory..it's Jack Bauer'
by eppdude
Jun 1st, 2006
09:14:45 PM
It'll be terrible and make huge money...
by Alonzo Mosely
Jun 1st, 2006
09:18:27 PM
Die Harderest: Mostly Dead
by stvnhthr
Jun 1st, 2006
09:30:34 PM
I'm with you Toe Jam - 24 all over again.
by moviemaniac-7
Jun 1st, 2006
09:31:08 PM
Think I'd rather see Die Hard 12: Die Hungry
by Zeke25:17
Jun 1st, 2006
09:39:35 PM
Great script review Merrick
by Darth Thoth
Jun 1st, 2006
09:44:40 PM
The Deadliest Game
by stvnhthr
Jun 1st, 2006
09:59:11 PM
Didnt anyone like Die Hard 3
by Lovecraftfan
Jun 1st, 2006
10:15:48 PM
The Most Dangerous Game
by DarthCorleone
Jun 1st, 2006
10:20:52 PM
Flash Gordon is on Encore Action right now
by Sir Loin
Jun 1st, 2006
10:28:35 PM
You have to contain the location of a Die Hard movie!
by Osmosis Jones
Jun 1st, 2006
10:43:53 PM
Capt. Miller...
by havocSchultz
Jun 1st, 2006
10:53:39 PM
Hard Boiled Detective
by CHEWBLACCA
Jun 1st, 2006
11:25:08 PM
I actually liked Die Hard 3
by Darth Thoth
Jun 1st, 2006
11:25:18 PM
Who I want to see as McClane Jr.
by Claudio
Jun 2nd, 2006
12:25:49 AM

by Regicidal_Maniac
Jun 2nd, 2006
12:29:23 AM
Fucking Keyboard!
by Regicidal_Maniac
Jun 2nd, 2006
12:35:30 AM

by Claudio
Jun 2nd, 2006
12:51:59 AM
i second the jack black idea ...
by caipirina
Jun 2nd, 2006
12:56:43 AM
Revenge of the Nerds.
by veritasses
Jun 2nd, 2006
01:17:25 AM
"Richardson was a writer on BAD BOYS"
by CuervoJones
Jun 2nd, 2006
02:38:09 AM
I Used To Write Scripts Hoping They'd Become DH Sequels
by Buzz Maverik
Jun 2nd, 2006
02:56:38 AM
Whow, now i'm definitely SO NOT INTERESTED
by CurryIce
Jun 2nd, 2006
02:59:33 AM
DEAD HARD?
by Buzz Maverik
Jun 2nd, 2006
03:02:26 AM
Hans Gruber is still one of my fav baddies
by spectrebeeyatch
Jun 2nd, 2006
03:26:59 AM
Shocker
by Fortunesfool
Jun 2nd, 2006
03:34:56 AM
Terrorist without machine guns are pussies!
by Max Rockatansky
Jun 2nd, 2006
03:48:42 AM
"and his self-restraint is thinner than ever before"
by TheBoyFromUlster
Jun 2nd, 2006
04:20:33 AM
it's 39
by reckni
Jun 2nd, 2006
05:36:28 AM
EMINEM for the role of the son!
by IAmMrMonkey
Jun 2nd, 2006
05:38:55 AM
This script review is already outdated.
by FatPaul
Jun 2nd, 2006
06:24:18 AM
Die Hard 3 was cool.
by Teamwak
Jun 2nd, 2006
06:37:27 AM
Why is it that in the script stage...
by DocBosch
Jun 2nd, 2006
07:59:45 AM
"Shoot, the glass."
by brycemonkey
Jun 2nd, 2006
08:00:09 AM
DarthCorleone
by stvnhthr
Jun 2nd, 2006
08:12:10 AM
No real bad guys once again!!!!!!!!
by ptindy
Jun 2nd, 2006
08:15:54 AM
Nope. Move along. Nothing to see here.
by Roguewriter
Jun 2nd, 2006
08:46:10 AM
Diehard Y2K?
by ScienceMan
Jun 2nd, 2006
09:01:07 AM
QUESTION FOR MERRICK PLEASE
by optimist008
Jun 2nd, 2006
09:07:18 AM
I loves me some Die Hard, but....
by savagexp
Jun 2nd, 2006
09:28:56 AM
Said it before, will say it again
by Cotton McKnight
Jun 2nd, 2006
11:06:35 AM
Dude, you are tripping.
by brycemonkey
Jun 2nd, 2006
11:31:02 AM
Ptindy: North Korean terrorists?
by FatPaul
Jun 2nd, 2006
11:47:07 AM
2 and 3 are not in the same league as 1
by I Dunno
Jun 2nd, 2006
01:09:35 PM
I also like Die Hard 3!
by pokadoo
Jun 2nd, 2006
01:53:36 PM
will he be wearing another sandwich board in this?
by durhay
Jun 2nd, 2006
01:55:43 PM
Sounds like it has potential
by Lost Skeleton
Jun 2nd, 2006
02:13:49 PM
i want to see this..
by El Borak
Jun 2nd, 2006
02:49:55 PM
Sounds too "epic"
by Billy_Batts
Jun 2nd, 2006
03:09:49 PM
If they tone down the violence..
by Neo Zeed
Jun 2nd, 2006
03:33:35 PM
Merrick why did you get rid of the Transformers..
by godhatesyou
Jun 2nd, 2006
04:41:57 PM
It wasn't Merrick, godhatesyou
by finky089
Jun 2nd, 2006
04:45:45 PM
Merrick had destroyed the Transformers movie.
by godhatesyou
Jun 2nd, 2006
04:50:30 PM
Please Lord, don't let Justin Timberlake be in this...
by Col. Klink
Jun 2nd, 2006
05:12:44 PM
Die Hard 3 was not a Die Hard movie...
by Col. Klink
Jun 2nd, 2006
05:21:20 PM
good god this is bad
by LarryTheCableGuy
Jun 2nd, 2006
05:27:29 PM
will this one be set at christmas time?
by LarryTheCableGuy
Jun 2nd, 2006
05:34:00 PM
Shopping Mall at Christmas...
by finky089
Jun 2nd, 2006
05:41:32 PM
Die Hard creators have a beer and cheet on McClane
by finky089
Jun 2nd, 2006
06:00:59 PM
Not Die Hard
by Playhouse
Jun 2nd, 2006
08:38:48 PM
you lost me with the writer's resume
by Maniaq
Jun 2nd, 2006
09:35:08 PM
The only way for the Die Hard 4 script to work.
by Alonzo Mosely
Jun 2nd, 2006
10:25:13 PM
Actually Maniaq, DH2 was NOT a Die Hard movie either
by Col. Klink
Jun 2nd, 2006
10:30:06 PM
Hey, Sweet! I say go with it.
by BendersShinyAss
Jun 3rd, 2006
03:51:29 AM
I must be the only person who saw DH2 on par with DH1
by BendersShinyAss
Jun 3rd, 2006
04:03:14 AM
Just sounds too big...
by dr_buggerlugs
Jun 3rd, 2006
05:49:12 AM
not usually a hater
by smackfu
Jun 3rd, 2006
06:34:24 AM
Merrick---can you confirm this scoop from CINESCAPE?
by masheen81
Jun 3rd, 2006
09:53:57 AM
Amercia the depressing....
by UncleEthan
Jun 3rd, 2006
10:11:13 AM
So McClane' son saves the day then?
by football
Jun 3rd, 2006
04:20:20 PM
Movie villain = Ashton Kutcher
by veritasses
Jun 4th, 2006
12:07:38 AM
So the terrorists are going to do a cybercrime ....
by Mr Cairo
Jun 4th, 2006
02:47:39 AM
what the fuck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
by dirty old len
Jun 4th, 2006
10:50:12 AM
It burnsssss usssss!
by 'Cholera's Ghost
Jun 4th, 2006
11:50:31 AM
ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!!!??
by Captain Happy
Jun 4th, 2006
12:50:08 PM
PS/
by Captain Happy
Jun 4th, 2006
01:00:18 PM
You know what would have been a great John McLane flick
by Orbots Commander
Jun 4th, 2006
04:59:38 PM
Techno Horseshit
by Antz
Jun 4th, 2006
05:11:57 PM
"banned together?"
by Childe Roland
Jun 5th, 2006
09:34:39 AM
First
by AddictedtoBoobs
Oct 20th, 2006
04:38:59 PM
Dr. Mindbender must be rolling over in his grave.
by Flansy
Oct 21st, 2006
12:59:59 PM
where are all the other posts?
by just pillow talk
Jun 26th, 2007
01:27:29 PM
Wow it was far more promising
by SpencerTrilby
Jul 12th, 2007
05:35:01 PM

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